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Synthesis and Transformation

Synthesis and Transformation

Give the task of synthesizing and transforming these two sentences:

  1. John ran after the snatch thief.
  2. John tripped over a stone and fell.

Into just one of this form:

  1. While ____________, ____________.

The provided choices were:

Answer 1:
While running after the snatch thief, John tripped over a stone and fell.

Answer 2:
While John was running after the snatch thief, he tripped over a stone and fell.

My students are often confused as to how to synthesise and transform those two sentences. My explanation is to identify the main clause. So Answer 1 is correct.

Is there a better explanation?



Top Answer/Comment:

Looking up the terms 'synthesise' and 'transform' on various websites, I'm not sure the latter at least has an agreed definition. Some sites seem to license any correct paraphrasing.

Using a contrastive coordinator

  • John ran after the snatch thief, but he tripped over a stone and fell.

is one way to use fewer full stops.

But I'd prefer a more staccato style here. Optimal rephrasing and question constraints are, in my opinion, at odds. This happens all too often in such questions.

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